There was no door that opened or no rustling that foreshadowed this event at all so I am confused as to where he was this entire time and like I said, if he was in the room. It felt really weird that he suddenly was just placed in the room to shoot Chigara with no context at all other than a bullet. It never really felt like Chigara saw anything significant in Kayto which made it just feel awkward and at times just shoved in for filler.īack to the Liberation Day Massacre, we then have when Fontana shoots Chigara in which I already think this scene plays out a little awkwardly because this also brings up the fact that these two turrets never struck one bullet at Kayto or Fontana if Fontana was in the room and if he wasn't which I wouldn't see why not. It also fell short in this scene because as a reader and with the awkward pacing I felt as if these two really didn't love each other for more than a couple days and at most maybe a couple weeks, but in reality I feel like even around 3 - 4 hours of this screen time for these two not even regarding their relationship wouldn't have been long enough to hold a foundation for why these two love each other. This I would have been fine with if I would have been able to feel and understand Kayto's Relationship with Chigara let alone this situation seemed a little too "Sleeping Beauty-esque" for me because of the circumstances of the possession that happened to her. The next issue that comes after this is the scene where Chigara's Possession blows over. After the two turrets came down and supposedly gunned down everyone in the room, while I don't know exactly what the room layout was, it irked me how Kayto Shields was left perfectly untouched during this scene. I am not speaking about the extended cut ending with the aftermath of the Liberation Day Massacre, I am speaking about the Liberation Day Massacre. The ending like I said was what stumped me.
I just want to give out one reminder before I talk about it if the spoiler tag wasn't enough before I start. I also have just been thinking about this VN for a while and what mostly stumped me was the ending.
I have waited a long time to post this because I feel like I would get a lot of flak for the opinions I have.